[pedestal]
fallen from the
highest shelf,
i hear through the glass
your slams at me:
couldn’t i be less broken?
but watching you fall;
the pieces of my art,
(shards of it embed the heart).
tones of pause
and gut cries:
couldn’t i be less taken?~
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That really took me on some journeys in just those few short lines.
I read it three times and got three different visions.
I continue to be amazed by your words.
xo
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fabulous portrait of shattered heart.